best words in the best order, sometimes poetry

Tuesday, February 28, 2006

POEM

WAVES (2004)


I

I roll away from the warmth of your curve,
cleaned by the salt air,
to where the tapering arc of the island’s southern tip
is split by a narrow channel. Where
line after line of waves charge from opposite tides
and clash - spew shouts of white, vertical
in the morning sun.


II


Pebbles like goose-bumps
sweat and shine as

the sequinned sea billows,
is gently lifted

in late afternoon, unzipped
by unseen fingers

falling on the shore
petticoat white


gasps tumbling over
into the air


that plays with my ear.



III

We walk towards the village
through olive groves and amber waves
of irregular wheat fields that lay
half-filled with wildflowers
hissing in the southerly.

And I am reminded of a sound
smiling and fragrant -

my grandmother pouring sugar,
before breaking eggs.


IV

A cold front over the island
conjures restless shadows
in the swollen, blue-black tide
that thwacks and snaps
monumental questions
against the unmoved dock;
where we stand -
our fingers braided
like hemp rope
at
midnight in moonlight.



V


From this height there are no waves.


Just flat blue, carefully painted
into the tan curve of the bays
bleeding emerald and silt-yellow,
intermittently flashing
white like fire-flies.

But I understand the illusion;
Know there are waves down there
that have always been there,
since that first tide came
silently pulling our blood
backward and forward.


(mike smith 2004)

Wednesday, February 22, 2006




Poetry and Painting.






similarities and differences between painting and poetry -

a link to the art we are attracted to - its subject, form, rhythm, color, level of abstraction - and the poetry that resonates for each of us?

The art that has hung in my room for a few years must satisfy something deep:
Matisse- The King’s Sadness / Dutreleau - Wave
/ Giacometti - Man Walking

Matisse -
Astonishing force and magnetism. His postivism, lack of alienation, inventivness. His use of strong colours. Mosaic/collage. His balance of realism and abstraction. His musicality.
Simplicity: geometric without being cold; A down-to-earth decadence and pleasure.

works of Matisse I love.

Dutreleau -
Controlled but strong emotion of his work, rich color, powerful deep blue seascapes, deep stillness. Balance between realism and abstraction.

Giacometti -
Simplicity and deep determination and dignity of his figures. Man Walking: The subject - the action of walking... stark but vitally human...as if this is the only thing at the core of our existence: To keep walking, to move foward.

how do the elements of these paintings - perhaps their common tilt towards realism/abstraction, the singular/solitary, simplicity, movement, strong color -
connect with the poetry I read and write?



Saturday, February 18, 2006

POEM

Blue Eyes


You know that blue

The one

In crowded June skies

Through holes: whisper-edged

And brilliant

Like a flash from an old box camera

That blue some call Eggshell.


It was that kind of blue

Hard and vulnerable as eggshells

Cracked me

Across the counter

When she glanced up

Over her coffee


And slow-blinked.



(mike smith 2004)

Thursday, February 16, 2006

So much can be said, and unsaid, in so few words.



Carl Sandburg's


Fog



The fog comes
on little cat feet.

It sits looking
over harbor and city
on silent haunches
and then moves on.


Louise Bogan's


Solitary Observation Brought Back From A Sojourn In Hell

At midnight tears
Run into your ears
.



The Roman poet
Horace writes:


Boy, I detest the Persian style
Of elaboration, Garlands bore me
Laced up with lime-bark. Don't run a mile
To find the last roses of summer for me.

None of your fussy attempts to refine
On simple myrtle. Myrtle suits both
You pouring, me drinking, wine
Under the trellised vine's thick growth.


Haiku is perhaps the ultimate in brevity, for example, Basho's

An old pond!
A frog jumps in-
The sound of water.


I like the spare discipline of Haiku form: its infinite possibility within the strict structure; it's deep connection with seasons and nature - but as
British poet
Roger McGough writes -

The only problem
with Haiku is that you just
get started and then



When I was twelve I wrote my first poem. It was called "The Fox."
I wrote it in class when our teacher was out sick. I didn't think so at the time, but perhaps she was making love in a field somewhere.

I hope so.

I dedicated "The Fox" to our temporary teacher who simply told us to "be quiet" and "get on with some work, or whatever."

At the bell, I gave her the poem because of the way she watched us, sniffing out any suspicious whispers.

I wrote the poem because something inside told me to write a poem.
And because I was in love.

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Pablo Neruda wrote:

And it was at that age...poetry arrived
in search of me. I don't know, I don't know where
it came from, from winter or river.
I don't know how or when,
no, they were not voices, they were not
words, not silence,
but from a street it called me,
from the branches of night,
abruptly from the others,
among raging fires
or returning alone,
there it was, without a face,
and it touched me.

(from Poetry)

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Poetry is the journal of the sea animal living on land, wanting to fly in the air
-
Carl Sandburg